Thalamus

Your work definitely has improved since I got to read it last. (Which was probably 2 years ago almost?)  The first line had me laughing right off the bat - had me thinking of the people that drive through our area with their car stereos turned up very loud and rumbling - you can hear them coming from far off.   I know that music messes me up when I'm trying to write and makes me completely useless.  That's kinda the frame of mind this poem put me in.  Excellent job!!

And yes - we need a viking raid - only we have to abduct Romeo first and then we have to find a virgin - cuz I'm all out!  I don't think Pedi is usable for that role anymore.      So have you set up a Smexi plex here?

Also, I checked out your personal site and I really liked your visual poetry - Distant Shores.  That was just awesome!  I hope I can get my work back up to speed - it appears that I'm going to have to catch up with you in skill level! hahaha lol