Dandelion

first of all Jen, I love this, it made me feel a bit lighter after reading.

Just a couple of suggestions:

In the line "Sailing through the blue skies" there seems to be a beat missing for me when I read it.  Maybe an added word?

Same goes with the last three lines, they work well together but seem short compared to the rest.

As always I love reading your stuff

----- Life is what happens while you wait for great things.