Expanses

I agree with you. I wouldn't change a thing in it. I especially love the repeating refrain, "the home is the only home" as though we are somehow tethered spiritually and in other intangible ways despite our travels. I also love how the mirror is made opaque, as if we must look elsewhere for reflection (the sky, etc) and though the previous reviewer said something about "paths" being a less desirable choice for having been used- I think that holds water only if it is not being used in a fresh and inventive way (everything's been said, done and used, afterall)....I look forward to reading more of your work....C