Dying Between Time's Walls

Hours of activity, him made a metronome?

That line just seemed to skip?  But, as I said, it's this piece needs to be read aloud at a workshop, a reading.  Google your local Barnes and Noble, Borders, find a workshop.  Join!

 I loved the rhythm of it, and the language you chose,  Quite often, poets choose to speak only in plain language, only in free verse or a modern beat poetry.  This was intricate and apparently well labored over, loved.

It's a beautiful piece.  It's lush, .