Rewarding the Artist or An Artist's Reward

Yeah, you make some good observations, Shan. I'm wondering if it's because the third stanza speaks so literally and directly to the subject whilst the preceding stanzas don't. I dunno. The rhythm of the piece is weird because I do that sometimes just to see what effect it has. Surprisingly, it usually has a weird effect...hehehehe...Thank you so much for giving me honest feedback. I appreciate it more than I can tell you....C