Pieces

 I do that erase thing too, attack of nerves

all I write is shite, it's more consistant that way.

the 4th stanza seems not in keeping with the rest of the poem, could be me, but I think it could stand without it.... or it could be a poem of its own (I do like the wording in it).

btw all my reviewing is shite as well - so feel free to ignore me completely 

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