I gots two poems for you to slay

Leanne, thanks for the feedback on both poems. It's funny, I think I cut out the lines you liked best in the second version of "plastic bags" and I was very uncertain about doing it. Maybe I'll put it back in. And I'm sure I'll be revisiting the poem again (and again).

I'll check out your advice regarding "Cocksure," too, when I have a bit more time. I'm supposed to be getting my home ready to entertain people tomorrow on Easter. Hard to do when you're the kind of person who's easily distracted by shiny objects.

Thanks again!