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I gots two poems for you to slay
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Tracey, I can't comment on Cocksure, you must have it locked. But I love the sound of the first stanza particularly, it has a great rhythm that works really well read aloud. I thought it fell a little flat in the second -- it just sounds like too much information telling too little of specifics, if that makes any sense at all. The last lines are, of course, priceless.
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- » Tracey on Apr. 7 2007 - Leanne, thanks for the feedback on both poems. It's funny, ...
by Leanne on Apr. 7 2007