The Drowning Mermaid

Stephan, thank you so much for your insightful comments and suggestions. You've given me some things to think about which I very much appreciate. Writing of this subject has been something I've had in the back of my mind for a long time. I very much agree with much of what you suggest- I am also wondering, in the context of a collection of poems about my life, if some different viewpoint might be seen. The mythology of the mermaid was an idealised life free of the sexual demands of men- even as a child. Many undertows came for me that she closed her eyes to or even assisted. So, this poem is a small sliver and may not be what it first appears- nevertheless, I still take all your comments to heart for anything that will help me to become a stronger writer is extremely valuable to me. Thank you for helping me. Yours,C


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