This Is Me

Dave, you paint a lovely picture and it's a pleasure to have you on board.  Your kinship with the land is evident and you have a fine touch, although ideally I'd love to see a few of the more common phrases taken out of this and replaced with words that are more uniquely you.  If you're interested in editing, I'd be happy to spend some time with you -- or, if not, I'm happy to read what you've written, enjoy it and leave you alone