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Yeh - I can see that, so it helps compensate for my messed up meter :>
As it was before, the line stood on its own as a seperate entity, disrupting the [puke alert] flow, although in that way, it also [in my dishevelled mind] made the statement serve as a question. I'm reading again, and think your version still does that, but more subtly. Subtlety is not in my repertoire at present [capricious bastard], but when it does finally return, I'm gonna kick seven kinds of shit out of it...
As it was before, the line stood on its own as a seperate entity, disrupting the [puke alert] flow, although in that way, it also [in my dishevelled mind] made the statement serve as a question. I'm reading again, and think your version still does that, but more subtly. Subtlety is not in my repertoire at present [capricious bastard], but when it does finally return, I'm gonna kick seven kinds of shit out of it...
by Aphasic on Apr. 17 2008