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it's a lovely piece, but I wonder do you intend the rhymes? In S1 it seems to start as a friendly metered rhyming. then in "eastern sky, high" appears to continue the rhyme. It could be rhymed for the remainder, but I don't thnk that was your intent. Either way, I miss shooting stars, too much city around here...
by Callooh on Apr. 12 2008