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This is compelling: real and raw, the whole damn thing from title to end. I only have one suggestion and that is to take out this line:

"wooden rage pulsates against my door"

I felt this line was a little dramatic for the rest of the write, slightly broke away from the overall tone and I really don't think it's needed. Otherwise, so many great lines. I look for poetry like this, poetry that jolts and bites.

Well done,

Emeya