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Alaska.

 

Land of the Midnight Sun. I was born in Ketchikan. A couple of years ago I spent the winter in a cabin (realizing everybody is going to warmer places to pass winter). It's beautiful. The quality of air...

 

can't imagine hitchhiking there though. It seems like it would take awhile to get anywhere. Then again, what's the rush.

 

I really like the phrase "dream tied." I sensed a sort of whimsy and desolation both throughout the write and then the ending stanza brings it all together nicely. My only suggestion is small and barely relevant, but: Maybe consider putting a hyphen so that it's "dream-tied" --I told you it was small.

 

-Emeya

by Emeya on Apr. 4 2008