Timekeeping

I feel that, while the sentiment is there, the words chosen to express it could be better. With the 2^nd line I think that it's a little cliché. With the 3^rd line, I like the line itself but find that the tone of it (it's a touch satirical (or maybe that's not the word I want to use, but...)) does not match the following lines to me.

I don't know if I'm making sense anymore. Haljfdsh afljahs fljdh hfl sa.

Hope that is clearer. Somewhat. Kinda. Maybe. I love the way you separated "this pause" from the rest like that.

-Em