Tale of The Villagers of Light

I thought this was very interesting indeed!

One suggestion, you start out as if a poem and end in prose.  I would stick to one form or the other, I like the prose better. 

Shortening it may also add value to the overall impact.  Take out some un-needed words and make the words that remain stand out,

overal, very enjoyable read!

----- Life is what happens while you wait for great things.