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Overall, I liked the descriptive words of this poem.  I think alot of useless words can be taken out and the poem needs to be tightened up. Some lines rhyme, others do not and the cadence is confusing to me. The word trout is used twice and close together-can another noun be used? 

 What is a sea trout's silver spoon?

I am confused as to what the poem should say or carry.  It seems like a list of observations to me. Is that the intent?

 Anne

by Anne on Mar. 1 2008