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Infinite Monkeys. Infinite Typewriters.
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I like the way your poem reads. Your "picking bones" reference I think was the most poignant part of your poem, as it references back to the haunting memories which never really fade. I also like the minimal style of this, as I'm one to loose interest pretty quick with the lengthy poetry, no matter how well-written it may be;) You've conveyed your mood very clearly in this. I'm a very visual person, and I would center your poem, I think it would look better. This pause
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