on traveling widely in a small place

I meant to comment on this yesterday but i got all distracted by the site being a beast.

So, let me say, i love this. It is soft and feminine and delicate and beautiful.

I'm reminded at once of a roadtrip and a pensive moment alone in the woods. There is an at-home-ed-ness and an unfettered freedom. Sort of a duality thing going on. And the seasonal, natural parts give this a haiku-tone, while the extended metaphor of the bird adds an incredible layer to this.

I have no suggestions on the words. I think this is concise and economic. the images are powerful and the word choices seem well-conceived.