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Butter gold of brown trout
Ok.. for some reason, the 'butter gold of brown' struck me odd. It's probably just me, but i had some trouble wrapping my brain around it.
is melting down the river's throat;
love that. LOVE. THAT.
The bark-brown fields
of ploughed-up folds
This is a very interesting use of short line to turn the poem. With the persistence of color and the somewhat impressionist use of words, this sudden short stroke amidst the generally longer lusher ones stood out and created just the right movement toward the conclusion. I really thought that was well done.
Butter gold of brown trout
Ok.. for some reason, the 'butter gold of brown' struck me odd. It's probably just me, but i had some trouble wrapping my brain around it.
is melting down the river's throat;
love that. LOVE. THAT.
The bark-brown fields
of ploughed-up folds
This is a very interesting use of short line to turn the poem. With the persistence of color and the somewhat impressionist use of words, this sudden short stroke amidst the generally longer lusher ones stood out and created just the right movement toward the conclusion. I really thought that was well done.
by Anstey on Feb. 29 2008