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ohh, this one had me until the -- very -- last -- line......no, no, don't end this great poem with a kiss[!]......though I'm sure your intention was grand, the last line is a let-down in creativity......let's see....."as they close/ and [something very breathtakingly poetic]"......or anything as haunting as "the fog coming at night in the hills of San Luis Obispo".....or "electric halo softening the years in your eyes"......please, no kiss 
.....Kat
.....Kat
by Kat on Feb. 23 2008