Moody and Mammoth

I actually like the title Mike. I realize though, particularly as Leanne has focussed this, that few if any outside the city would realize how specifically that describes the place. Now, I'm not sure of this, but it seems to be a reference to those kids that jumped off the bridge there last year, maybe the title might more clearly frame that aspect and that might clarify a lot of the later part of the poem. It's probably pretty hard for me to judge since I live about 1/2 mile from that spot and drove by the stupid tributes there, and then shook my head as they put up the ridiculous fence and then shook it even more when the next kid jumped. So it's all very clear image to me, and thus very moving.