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Thank you Leanne (and Mos!), the punctuation is now gone, I changed a few more words and got rid of few that seemed to extraneous and did away with the one stanza break. I love 'bleeding' onto the page and then watching it take new shape and form. I also love suggestions and ideas that make me look differently at what I have done!!!

I do like this so much better thus far!!!  

----- LIFE: I messed up, can I have a 'do over'?