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Emeya: thank you so very much for your suggestions! I always love new ideas and do so like yours for this poem. I will play with that idea today while I am stuck in this bed and sick, ugh.

Mos: you are quite right, it bled from me in a matter of seconds and this is very much a raw and rough draft. It was a cathartic write to say the least and points to how 'used' I have felt lately. You are quite perceptive my friend! 

----- LIFE: I messed up, can I have a 'do over'?