![]() Colleen Sperry 622 posts | Thank you so much for posting all these different forms.. I haven't ever heard of this one...not sure I'm up for it .. but its great to learn the forms... or at least be aware of them... thanks!!! |
![]() Leanne Hansonfrom Just west of the lounge room Associate, 3708 posts | The form itself is actually not hard -- it's getting it to say something that's the trick! |
![]() Laura doomfrom The Divided Queendom Associate, 1336 posts | I don't know why, but I find these forms - rondeau, villanelle, madrigal etc. - intimidating due to (I keep telling myself) the refrain/rentrement/repetition thing. This one does say something to me - it's redolent of Pre-Raphaelite themes of Waterhouse et al, and Tennyson's Lady of Shallot - I'm not sure why that poem stayed with me. Perhaps it was something to do with my thoughts at the time of reading: 'Lancelot, Camelot, ...(?)'; a title almost as inspiring as 'Lord'. |
![]() W, Emeya 132 posts | Okay...I might try this. You know how I am with meter, well, actually you don't because I don't write in meter. Maybe that's the issue. Anyway, will try.
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![]() Jennifer Raganfrom Camillus, New York 423 posts | This is a cool write and decided to give this a try myself. |