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Madrigal (English or Chaucerian)

The Madrigal is a repeating form, written in iambic pentameter (the "natural" meter of English, apparently) -- the scheme goes like this:

A (first repeater)
B1 (second repeater)
B2 (third repeater)

a
b
A (first repeater)
B1 (second repeater)

a
b
b
A (first repeater)
B1 (second repeater)
B2 (third repeater)

 

 

Mourning the Lilly Maid

Why should I leave such thoughts? I am of Earth
The Lilly Maiden's sighs were oft misread
She could have saved his soul, but now she's dead

Her tender heart, ill-fated passion's berth
For Lancelot, who would betray instead
Why should I leave such thoughts? I am of Earth
The Lilly Maiden's sighs were oft misread

Her blood was hot, her eyes were full of mirth
So young she was, her life stretched out ahead
But now the boatman steers her final bed
Why should I leave such thoughts? I am of Earth
The Lilly Maiden's sighs were oft misread
She could have saved his soul, but now she's dead.

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Colleen Sperry
622 posts

on Sep. 18 2007


Thank you so much for posting all these different forms.. I haven't ever heard of this one...not sure I'm up for it .. but its great to learn the forms... or at least be aware of them...   thanks!!!
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Leanne Hansonfrom Just west of the lounge room
Associate, 3708 posts

on Sep. 18 2007


The form itself is actually not hard -- it's getting it to say something that's the trick!
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Laura doomfrom The Divided Queendom
Associate, 1336 posts

on Mar. 29 2008


I don't know why, but I find these forms - rondeau, villanelle, madrigal etc. - intimidating due to (I keep telling myself) the refrain/rentrement/repetition thing.
This one does say something to me - it's redolent of Pre-Raphaelite themes of Waterhouse et al, and Tennyson's Lady of Shallot - I'm not sure why that poem stayed with me. Perhaps it was something to do with my thoughts at the time of reading: 'Lancelot, Camelot, ...(?)'; a title almost as inspiring as 'Lord'.
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W, Emeya
132 posts

on Mar. 29 2008


Okay...I might try this. You know how I am with meter, well, actually you don't because I don't write in meter. Maybe that's the issue.

Anyway, will try.

 

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Jennifer Raganfrom Camillus, New York
423 posts

on Mar. 29 2008


This is a cool write and decided to give this a try myself.

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