https://dev.shakespearesmonkeys.com/section-333-shan-s-fiction Any advice, critiques welcome and appreciated greatly. en 2005-2012 shakespearesmonekys@gmail.com 42.65593 -71.33391 Tue, 09 Jun 2026 10:51:26 GMT yacs http://blogs.law.harvard.edu/tech/rss 70 https://dev.shakespearesmonkeys.com/article-11825-query-letter-from-the-outside-looking-in https://dev.shakespearesmonkeys.com/article-11825-query-letter-from-the-outside-looking-in need advice please! version 2 Shannon McEwen Shan's Fiction Fri, 07 Aug 2009 05:23:15 GMT /section-333-shan-s-fiction#comments 0 https://dev.shakespearesmonkeys.com/comments/post.php/article/11825 https://dev.shakespearesmonkeys.com/comments/feed.php/article/11825 https://dev.shakespearesmonkeys.com/links/trackback.php?anchor=article%3A11825 https://dev.shakespearesmonkeys.com/article-4507-from-the-outside-looking-in-chapter-one https://dev.shakespearesmonkeys.com/article-4507-from-the-outside-looking-in-chapter-one I would greatly appreciate anyone's honest, brutal feedback. (I've written the whole thing and it's sitting rotting in my hard drive Shannon McEwen Shan's Fiction Sun, 23 Nov 2008 18:02:56 GMT /section-333-shan-s-fiction#comments 5 https://dev.shakespearesmonkeys.com/comments/post.php/article/4507 https://dev.shakespearesmonkeys.com/comments/feed.php/article/4507 https://dev.shakespearesmonkeys.com/links/trackback.php?anchor=article%3A4507