2- Jen 
on May 21 2007
I appreciate your honesty.
I perfer boogers, doggy doo and smelly smells too. 
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More in A Friend Is Someone Who Likes You Discuss: A Friend Is Someone Who Likes YouI keep changing this...what do you think?2- Jen |
1- Anstey
on May 21 2007
I think this is a bit too vanilla. One of the things I love most in yoru writing is when you're off the wall, gross, or absolutely silly. This, in my humble opinion, misses those marks. If your intended market is very small children, it's certainly ok for that, but even there, I think your submerging your natural flare for goofy to the point where it'll hurt the marketability of the piece.I don't 'hate it' -- it didn't grab me though
Sue me..i like the booger monster
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