2- Rene 
on May 21 2007
There is something so REAL about this piece! I love the statement and wouldn't change a thing with this one.
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Rene'
I am orbiting, I don't know where, but I am orbiting something!
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More in Outta Step with Convention Discuss: Outta Step with ConventionI could write a sonnet In iambic pentameter To say I Always Love you best in June Or I could just declare My Love for you is way over the moon But I’m not that proficient At keeping the beat Kind of like the way I can’t control each erratic thump Of my heart Whenever you smile at me2- Rene |
1- Derma Kaput
on May 10 2007
I really don't have much to say here, except I thought this was very simple and lovely with a beautiful finish. I guess it could use a better title, perhaps, but the poem itself is pretty good.