insomnia

An intruiging piece, full of some fantastic images and thoughts.

I must admit, one part I struggled with in regards to the poem is:

"to save myself
the dirty decent
to comfort her"

It caused me to "stagger" in my reading of the piece, the only real hiccup as I se it. I'm still trying to decide if you meant "the dirty descent" or not. That would actually work quite well with the conclusion to the piece. As "dirty decent", it also works, giving the reader a sense of the "unconvential" thought process. Personally though, I would suggest making it "descent" as it also infers a "descent into madness".

Great read all in all Callooh.

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Mos.