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i love the first three lines. The idea of tears as a drop of salt, the echo of ocean in the blue eyes -- with the hints of deep, salt and drops.... i like that.
the next few lines i'm less enamored of. I'm trying to figure out why i don't before i comment on that. but i do love the first three lines.
by Anstey on Jan. 25 2008