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I remember when I was a kid, my dad used to call bingo at the day care centre -- he nearly got thrown out by the matron a time or two for being a bit on the rude side, but the old ladies loved it. ("Legs eleven, stairway to heaven" was a fave). The randomness of the balls, formed into a pattern by the cards, is actually a really great metaphor for life and I'm impressed with the way you've handled it. It may be possible to tighten up some of the lines, get rid of a couple of prepositions and such, but it's an enjoyable poem.
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