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Infinite Monkeys. Infinite Typewriters.
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You have a real mastery of the human in all its unpleasantness, and the relatively straightforward language of this makes it all the more poignant.
I only really have one suggestion -- how about instead of "Sometimes when the television is flickering" you try "Sometimes when the television flickers"? Oh, and gases is one s. Otherwise, it's all brilliant, with a particularly powerful ending.
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