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Just a small thought/suggestion as I read through this one;

 

"The bloodied handle proof
As you leave me
As I heal
My mind starts to bleed
You are unaffected"

Moving this one line would not change the meaning of the words but would give you the same word in the ending line as in the beginning line and it seems quite appropriate to the poem. Again, I like your words! 

----- just wandering the maze of hallways in my bent mind!

by Rene' on Jan. 6 2008