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Not to fear, I am not worried about revisions. As a matter of fact, I actually love them. I learn so much more in the process of the work evolving than I do at any other time of writing. I like your ideas and I hadn't really thought about the placement of 'faded' too much until you brought it up. I really like to think of both the eyes and the long years being faded but I can see where clarification is needed on both counts. 

----- Rene'