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If you go with the action words, don't use the 'ing' forms if you can help it. Stick with "fly","spring","leap" .. 'ing' is the devil 
(ok, not really, but focusing on making your writing more active really improves the impact.)
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(ok, not really, but focusing on making your writing more active really improves the impact.)-----
- stephan
by Anstey on Nov. 14 2007