The Inferno

In the context of dysfunctions on all sides of my family, I understand this and embrace a theme I don't often see in contemporary writing (admittedly, I read so much less than I used to that this theme might be everywhere and I may be in the proverbial dark).

I think I'd like more show than tell here. Or...that I'd like more lyrical language. Or...something. I feel like this is a draft - a later vs. an early draft -  on its way to become something more.