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Hey, I like this! Except these two lines:
Down the stream with all the fish Take some leaves, make a lovely dish
I'm not sure what they add...but I am probably missing something.
Down the stream with all the fish Take some leaves, make a lovely dish
I'm not sure what they add...but I am probably missing something.
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by Rhiannon Jones on Feb. 22 2007