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First of all, I like the poem, it leaves me with a feeling of peace but missing that kiss.
Second, I kind of agree with Alciun, It either needs to be broken into stanzas or punctuated (minimally of course). I think the effect would be even greater.
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Life is what happens while you wait for great things.
by Shan on Aug. 10 2007