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oh no, my southern accent is showing.....to my ear, it sounds like po-e-sy -- 3 sybs....and I was unsure about the use of 'announcing'.....was trying to convey a sense of apprehension that occurs each night......angry clouds announce the oncoming night, is what I meant......so additional revision is possible.....thanks, I always appreciate comments......btw, punctuation will forever challenge me....Kat
by Kat on Jul. 19 2007