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I love what you are doing here. And...it feels a bit too forced. I'm not at all an expert on sonnets, but I think a revision is in order. Think about things you really feel rather than what rhymes, and then see how you can make it work. You know we're all ready and willing to help!
by Tracey on Jul. 6 2007