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Ann Marie is Emily Rose, sort of like Fred is Alcuin.
I thought the imagery in this was very good. Without really going in depth, the first thing I'd do on this poem is find a way to clarify the end - like Alcuin, I think I made the correct assumption, but the final three lines make me feel very disconnected to the poem as a whole.
by Derma Kaput on June 15 2007