Bulldozer Prints

Let me start by saying, when it comes to the technicalities of form and structure I am generaly lost. But what I can say is a poem with no heart isn't worth my time reading. Granted this still could use a bit of tweaking, but for someone to say it is shit is beyond me. As I said earlier, this reminds me very much of something. If a poem can evoke a feeling, a thought, anything in a reader, there is no way in hell that it is hopeless.