First try - Little Willies

no need to quake in your boots, they're nice folks here who make some excellent suggestions:)

First of all your poem is hilarious. In the first stanza last line there seems to be an extra beat in there, other than that it's great!

In stanza 2, line 1, how about adding "all" before laugh? that would make the second line flow more smoothly.

Welcome to our community, I look forward to reading more.-----Life is what happens while you wait for great things.