Refill Your Pleasure Tank

OK, first half good, major overhaul second half! Thanks. The end did seem a bit jumbled, but I needed to confirm it.

You know how you keep re-writing something and then finally say 'Arrrgh' I did put this out a bit unfinished, but can now look at it again with a fresh perspective. You all are so helpful.

I used to cringe at critiques, now I know to treasure the feedback.