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This is so descriptive Colleen... I can see the images clearly. I also like the formatting with certain words prominent at the beginning of each thought. I most especially like the line "your stare blows cold through the flame" I just had a shiver up my spine reading that.
by Laurie Blum on Nov. 18 2009