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You got it, Pags, you've loaded up on the prepositions -- there's a the or two waiting to be chopped out as well. I feel the second stanza is pushing the allusion a little too hard, although I do like the idea (by the way, "courteously"). I'll wait for round two 
by Leanne Hanson on Jul. 12 2009