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I have a bit of a problem with grammar. I'm a bit rusty (could you tell?), but i'm working on an edit as fast as i can. That is...when my 6 month old isn't banging on the keyboard.
Thanks for the input!
update: grammar is hopefully better? punctuation added. I think this poem has been olished. Any other critiques PLEASE feel free to point out.
Well, poop.
by Jasmine Mann on May 3 2007