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As you rattle and hiss
coiled up in lies
I wonder if spite
has forked your tongue
and I can only imagine
how sharp your fangs are
Frorgive me for meddling with your work, but this slight tweak reads a bit better to me. Also, you really have me wishing you'd written more because I'm enjoying the visual.
Bill
by Suter Bill on Dec. 29 2008