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Hi,
How about scattered instead of shattered or crumbled? For some reason I want you to keep a word that begins with "s" there.
I think it would be holdfast not heldfast and neither really works. Perhaps "Yet we fastened to it."
Just a few ideas to think about.
by Jen on Apr. 20 2007