Juggling Joe And His Talented Toe

I've been thinking about this all day today, and since I've got a bit of brain fog I don't know that my advice will be helpful, but I'll try!

I keep wondering about the imagery in the first few stanzas (1-5) and whether or not it's specific enough. I have a hard time imagining what kind of illustrations will accompany those stanzas. The other stanzas read with crystal clear, fun imagery.

I think there might be a few spots where the rhythm is a bit off, but you'd be better off asking one of our resident experts about that.

Stick with it!